The ALL junior writers are exploring what is around us in the HUTT VALLEY.
Our first trip was to the top of the Wainuiomata Hill.
Back at school we wrote about what we had seen by making ‘describe the noun’ poems.
Here are some for you to read … can you imagine being at the top of the hill with us!
Birds – flying in the grey rain clouds
Cars – driving on the wet road
Sea – curling around the motorway
Mountains – standing with snow on the tops
Daniel
Snow – gliding on the hill
Sun – drying out the road
Sea – waving along the salty water
Hills – rolling like green waves
Alyis
Leaves – moving on the wet bushes
Cars – driving on the slippery road
Snow – staying on the mountains
Flax – standing on the hill sides
Shantelle
Snow – sparkling on the mountaintops
Sea – moving like trees rustling
Leaves – flowing everywhere in the wind
Waves – splashing on the sand
Nuam Sen
Rain – dropping on the zigzag road
Cars – rushing on the Wainui hills
Snow – shining like icing
Sea – sparkling beautifully in the sun
Beatrice
What lovely descriptive poems. I can just imagine being there with you. How beautiful the hills must have looked with snow on top! Keep up the fantastic writing 🙂